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[Disclaimer, please read the description before you read this poem, it shows how you're supposed to read  this piece, thank you]

We log on-check-check-check-checking over FaceBook-
Click-click-click-click-clinkin' all the updates-
(Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again)
            This is the new society

ten-fifty-seventy-ninety-over hundred friends online
three-twenty two-hundred nine the month before
(Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again)
            This is the new society

Block-block-block-block-all of the pornography
(Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again);
Minds-minds-minds-minds being trapped again
            An' this is the new society

beg-beg-beg-beg for something new again
give-give-give them something to shut them up
(Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again)
            This is the new society

Tap-tap-tap-tap until controller wears out again
If-you-get-up-this chance will never come again
(Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again)
            This is the new society

We-don't-need-much-social activity outside these walls
And-and-and-and-we gather all of our online popularity
Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again
            An' this is the new society

The-Sounds-of-SOPA being banned again
And days-go-by-faster than the usual
Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again
            This is the new society

I-have-been-more-exposed then ever before
This-is-the-big-social media that is destroying the youth!
Scroll-scroll-scroll-scroll-scrolling on the blogs again
            This is the new society



allpoetry.com/poem/8445289-Boo… (open this first then listen to the youtube audio and read along. PLEASE DON'T LISTEN FOR 2 HOURS)
youtu.be/Glcg95L4JK4

this was back in 1915 in WWI. They played this during the trench wars. 
It would loop for days, weeks, months. 
So I decided to modernize it. This is byfar the hardest poem I've ever written. Enjoy...

A DD??? HOLY ROURIETEROUTQWERNWERNOFDDSNDD>NLERJTNEWROTUQEROWOUqWN THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! OMGOMGOMGOMMGOMGOMGOmMGOMG
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Lucain24 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3 well thanks a lot! That means a lot coming from you. C: I would try that, I do it all the time when I'm alone, just never recorded it xD
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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hi! i hope you don't mind my humble feature:
your lovely piece is handpicked. (link)

thank you.
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Lucain24 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you :aww:  
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you too. this is for you: :iconwineplz: in celebration of your art.
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Lucain24 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol I don't drink, XD but I'll take a soda o3o/
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oopps, sorry. how about :pepsi: and :iconpizzasliceplz:?
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Lucain24 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sounds good! XD
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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Lucain24 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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